tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13726206.post3418314303404553828..comments2024-03-25T00:14:16.124-07:00Comments on Bread and Bread: writing prompt #2: follow me to the church of perfect lightCherylhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07554329549665664616noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13726206.post-80758893075753953392008-01-30T17:35:00.000-08:002008-01-30T17:35:00.000-08:00The ending is spot-on. I would have been very disa...The ending is spot-on. I would have been very disappointed if Lena hadn't stood up for herself. <BR/><BR/>Being a pastor or crazy in love doesn't justify ripping off your neighborhood rose seller.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13726206.post-59731059616253700802007-12-07T12:59:00.000-08:002007-12-07T12:59:00.000-08:00A girl's gotta eat.A girl's gotta eat.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07554329549665664616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13726206.post-73598302352505566632007-12-06T15:54:00.000-08:002007-12-06T15:54:00.000-08:00I was surprised she was still going to demand her ...I was surprised she was still going to demand her money. I kept thinking she was going to take pity on him and let it go. But that would have been a lame ending. Love these stories!Jamie Asaye FitzGeraldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00931892176059340714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13726206.post-40384482493480434732007-12-06T11:07:00.000-08:002007-12-06T11:07:00.000-08:00Thanks, Tucki. I wonder if the runaway is running ...Thanks, Tucki. I wonder if the runaway is running away from Pasadena's overzealous parking enforcement bureau.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07554329549665664616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13726206.post-16107291215312269112007-12-05T23:12:00.000-08:002007-12-05T23:12:00.000-08:00Love it!Here's a prompt for you:Dusk has set as a ...Love it!<BR/><BR/>Here's a prompt for you:<BR/><BR/>Dusk has set as a runaway from Pasadena reaches the summit of the Angeles Crest Highway. After walking all day, s/he finally takes a break and looks back at the city below.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13726206.post-52415615978135783262007-12-05T17:09:00.000-08:002007-12-05T17:09:00.000-08:00Thanks for reading all 1,400 words of it! You shou...Thanks for reading all 1,400 words of it! You should get a special prize. Cheese, maybe?Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07554329549665664616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13726206.post-25592184575115929192007-12-05T16:35:00.000-08:002007-12-05T16:35:00.000-08:00Oh,so lovely,Oh,so lovely,Tracy Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05310783668282179929noreply@blogger.com